Monday, August 13, 2012

Soak, No More!

Lonely and shivering
Covered with a tattered blanket
Praying it to not happen.

But He's merciless
He sends those dark demons
And they burst

Cold water kisses the chilly winter
The tattered blanket is no more tattered
Water sews its wounds

Soaked, I smile.
No more shivering, no more loneliness.
Soaked. No more.

P.S. Written for The Surf Excel Matic #SoakNoMore Contest of indiblogger. It's a very dark take on the topic, hope the intensity and emotions contained in this poem has struck a chord with your heart.

4 comments:

Manjulika pramod said...

Nice..
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palak said...

i like it :) something bit sad but still liked da way of expressing :) Soak no more :)

Murugesh said...

Loved this poem

Saurabh Chawla said...

nice post :) all the best!!

have a look at this one too hen you get time :) and yeah do promote it on indiblogger if you like it :)


http://saurabhchawla2345.blogspot.com/2012/08/i-had-dream.html