It was 3:30 am, summer of 2006. My sleep had been lost and my heart was pounding in its full excitement. For the last 4 hours I was on my bed with her. It was like a long-cherished dream come true.
Her name was Eva, that's what I used to call her lovingly, and she was Spanish. She was my first love. I had been seeing her for the last ten months. That summer, she was very kind to me, for she agreed to unravel all her secrets to me someday. And that night, her kindness was par excellence as she dissolved all my moments of wait. I still vividly recall those moments, Eva was sitting on my lap, her very touch gave me an exotic pleasure. My fingers moved all around her neck, as rapidly as they could, trying to feel her with all my senses alive.
Our fun was short-lived(game over in just 6 hours), as at 5 ‘o clock, somebody knocked the bolted door. Terrified, with her still lying on my bed, stark naked, I dared to open the door, with my exhausted fingers, having no option for her to hide.
It was my Mom, banging me with a straight-forward question, “What the hell are you doing with your door closed?”; I tried to provide the best possible explanation to stop her at the door, but she pushed me aside and entered the room to be shocked at seeing Eva lying helpless on my single bed, and that too without anything to cover her bare body. I was caught red-handed, but still I could not hide the excitement of my first night-stand.
I looked at Eva, but her face faced my Mom, she kept looking at my Mom with her mouth open in a circle but alas she did not have a tongue to counter my Mom's scolding.
I just smiled back at Mom because of the eternal joy I had with my first love : my first girl-friend, when she unravelled all her secrets to me. That was the time I realized that I could play any song on her as I won a special place in her heart !
I got my first real six-strings
Got it tuned and tried all the tricks
Played it till my fingers bled
It was summer of 2006
If I got the chance
I would always wanna be there
Those were the best days of my life
Got it tuned and tried all the tricks
Played it till my fingers bled
It was summer of 2006
If I got the chance
I would always wanna be there
Those were the best days of my life
P.S. Dirty minds, what have you been thinking about while reading the article?
P.S. Eva is still my girlfriend, no fights and no break-ups for us : That’s what is called ETERNAL LOVE.
16 comments:
i thought atlast harsh babu is going errotic. :D ..
ultimate yar... in the beginning i thought she doesnt know that you write a blog.. ;)
Main erotic par jaate jaate erratic ho gaya!!!
i thot u had started wrting sum titillating stuff...it is a gr8 piece of writing really....makes dirty minds like ours misconstrue it totally
From the begging only I thought this is not goin to b a girl...but i culdnt make out that it was ur guitar...all dis time..nice article...
tried some tricks! summer of 2006!!!
awesome mann,
ooooops....wen i was reading, i just cudnt believe tht it was u who did tht but at the end, i was sure tht it cud only b u who cud do tht
hmmm,,,, nicely done but to be true i knew there would be some twist but no doubt u wrote this stuff quite convincingly,,,now 1 thing more do tell some spl person to read this one for sure :P
mast tha but thankfully last mein koi cat nahi thi,chalo guitar tha.Hopefully u still think this way about only your guitar or..????
Hmmm...a very creative,imaginative,...embarrasing for the dirty minds....with all the fantasies a great piece of writing
hats off to you..
you rock!!
U almost had me there.....anyways excellent writing
oh God! cudn't even imagine ur ETERNAL LOVE wud turn out to b a guitar.. it was simply an amazing bit of writing!
All ur works r so very distinctly different, harsh, really..! n they're very addicting too...
u make me wanna read more n more, olwyzz...:)
Haha!! definitely not predictable, nice choice of words there ;). You are getting better with words with every piece. :)
Don't you think it's unfair of you calling others dirty minded? :P
I thought all along if it would turn out to be a dog. Thanks for the P.S, otherwise I wouldn't have known. :P
omg.. this one was the wittiest!!! i cudnt even imagine that the eternal love wud turn out to be a guitar...was quite perplexed throughout the piece of writing..the p.s. removed all the doubts!!
lol...it was quite amusing!!! :D
it's so realistic n nicely put up.......u r bound to thnk d othr way round..........:p
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